Sons, A Diamente Poem

Posted elsewhere on March 29, 2011. Revised on August 13, 2011.

Jo’s given me more fodder for thought in the form of poetic instruction.
Here’s the result:

sons

distant, close

fighting, growing, changing

Alpha, Omega, blinding, bright

infuriating, loving, endearing

warm, essential

sunrays

©March 2011 _M. Anita Bailey

The above is my first attempt at writing a Diamente poem:

Diamante poetry written in seven lines to form a diamond shape, [follows] precise rules for the types of words that go on each line.

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About emanita01

I am a Franco-american woman who hails from Brookline, Massachusetts. I live in France near the Swiss border, only minutes away from Geneva. I am a member of the Geneva Writers Group and the Association La Forge, a literary group based in France. I write stories, poems and am currently working on a couple of plays, a one-woman show and a dramatized poem.
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14 Responses to Sons, A Diamente Poem

  1. Pingback: Poems Are In My Thoughts « Music For Communication

  2. emanita01 says:

    Hi there!
    I enjoyed reading Poems Are in My Thoughts.
    Thanks for dropping in 🙂

  3. midaevalmaiden says:

    Wow Em, I don’t know anything about poetic forms and such. But the words you used are brilliant. I love the relationship you grafted between son, and sun.

    I just stopped by because I posted a video that I know you will get a kick out of. (Being as you seem to know your way around certain kilt wearing beings). heheh Do stop in if you get the chance.

    • emanita01 says:

      Hey there MM, you certainly know hos to peak my curiosity…LOL!
      Glad you liked the son/sun play here.
      Thanks for dropping in 😉
      And now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m on my way to see that kilt post…;-)

  4. Jo Bryant says:

    i am so happy to provide fodder for you. This is really good Em – really, really good. 😉

  5. very lovely word flow.

    🙂

    • emanita01 says:

      Hey there! I could have sworn I thanked you for your visit??!!
      But as I can’t see the reply I thought I’d posted, let me write it here:
      Welcome to The Cello Strings. Your words are music to my ears.
      Thanks for dropping in 😀

  6. Such a lovely poem and word flow happy picnic love your blog
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/

  7. dragonkatet says:

    I like this one – it has a good flow to it and the associations are wonderful! 🙂

  8. Jo missed one, it’s really, really, really good. 🙂

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