Time is illusion. As one lives one’s life it appears that ofttimes,
time’s too long, too short or neither short enough
or long enough. Time’s a very
malleable thing.
Yet, try
as you
may,
you
can
not
hold
time.
It
accommodates
itself to each one’s
perception. Its perceived absence has varying
impacts on our behavior, as does its perceived abundance.
Taking either for granted also has varying repercussions.
A life’s time is the same be it spent crying or singing.
Tears be thee gone!
Me, I definitely prefer song!
Wonderful write! I prefer song, too! Nice touch with the hourglass form.
Hello Charles, thanks for your kind words, for noticing my poem’s form (took a bit of time…LOL!) & for dropping in 😀
creative,
true, time is illusions, well done.
Aw, shucks! You are just too kind! Thanks much ;-D
prefer song, agree.
let the pain and sorrows go by like time,
Happy Thanksgiving.
🙂
Hi there! Or, let them go by at the speed of light 😀
Thanks for dropping in & Happy Thanskgiving to you too 😀
Very nice, but I prefer a song any day of the week.
Actually, so do I! I sing ALL the time…LOL!
Thanks for stopping by =)
I like the shape of the hourglass and it have a nice flow, yes I wud also go for the song.
Thanks!
Hmmmm, is this the beginning of…or perhaps, yes, a chorus in the making?
Thanks for popping in 🙂
Me too! All together now…………..
Time’s a running, so then now, shall we? And a one, a two, a one, two, three, four…
Beautifully written, nice shape too 🙂
Great write
Hi Eclipse, thank you ! Glad you liked it 🙂
And thanks for dropping in.
I prefer song but sometimes my song may make others cry…nice writing.
Hello Charlie Parant. Thanks 🙂
Now then, I do have a question:
Do your songs make others cry for their content or for their ton/pitch/
musicality…heh, heh, heh !
Joke apart, I think I know what you mean/are saying 😀
Thanks for your visit.
neat, love the ending,
smart story.
🙂
Thanks Morning 😉
Yes, definitely I’m of the song-preferring troupe 🙂 Thanks for sharing!
Welcome to the troupe then Guilie!
And thanks for reading me 😀
Wonderful sentiment… and clever poem design!
e.a.s. demers , Welcome! Glad you liked this one!
Thanks for dropping by 🙂